人教版六年级下册英语作文,,例文
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写作提分法
第 1 招
“三步四要素法”写如何与朋友进行比较的作文 方法指导
“三步”指按照开头（引出话题）、具体描述、写结束语三个步骤写作。“四要素”指在具体描述时写出年龄的比较，身高的比较，体重的比较和鞋码的比较。
写作模版
开头（引出话题）
I am ... I have a friend. Her name is...
年龄信息
I am ... years old. She is ...years old. ... older/younger than ...
具体描述
身高信息 I am...metres. She is...metres. ...taller/shorter than...
体重信息 I am...kilograms. She is...kilograms. ...thinner/stronger than...
鞋码信息
My shoes are... Her shoes are..
...smaller/bigger than...
结束语
We are good friend. 经典词句
必备单词、短语 必备句型 引出话题 name
friend
his
her my
I am Li Hua. My name is Li Hua. I have a friend. Her name is Linlin. 年龄信息 years
old I am 12 years old. She /He is 12 years old. 身高信息 metres I am 1.56 metres. She /He is 1.60 metres. 体重信息 kilograms I am 48kilograms. She /He is 50kilograms. 鞋码信息 Size37 My shoes are size 37. She wears size 38 shoes. 结束语 friend We are good friends. 范文赏析
Hello, I am Amy. I have a good friend. Her name is Lily. I am 12 years old. She is younger than
开头
年龄比较 me. She is 1.56 metres. I am 1.55 metres. I am shorter than her. She is 42 kilograms. I am 45
身高比较
体重比较 kilograns. I am heavier than her. Her shoes are size 37. My shoes are size 38. Her shoes are smaller
鞋码比较
than mine. We are different but we are good friends.
结尾
第 2 招
“三步两要素法”写上周末活动类的作文 方法指导
“三步”指按照开头（引出话题）、具体描述、写结束语三个步骤写作。“两要素“指描述时间和活动安排。
写作模版
开头（引出话题）
I was busy last weekend. I had a busy weekend.
时间
On Saturday morning, I ...
Then, I ....
具体描述
活动
I stayed at home and did my homework.
结束语
This is my last weekend. I was busy but happy. 经典词句
必备单词、短语 必备句型 引出话题 last weekend
busy I am busy last weekend. 时间描述 On Saturday morning, in the
afternoon, then, in the evening，on Sunday morning On Saturday morning, I
stayed at home and did my
homework. Then I cleaned
my room. 活动描述 Cleaned my room, washed my clothes, stayed at home, watched TV. Read a book, saw a film, had a cold, slept, went bozting Then I read a book. 结束语 busy
happy This is my last weekend. I was busy but happy.
范文赏析
My last weekend
Hello! I am Lingling. I was busy last weekend.
开头 On Saturday morning, I stayed at home and did my homework. Then I cleaned my room. In the
时间
活动
afternoon, I went to the park with my friends.
On Sunday morning, I visited my grandparents with
时间
活动
时间
my father and my mother. On Sunday afternoon, I read a book and washed my clothes.
活动
时间
活动 After that, I drank tea . In the evening, I watched TV with my parents. I went to bed at
活动
时间
活动
nine o’clock. This is my last weekend. I was busy but happy.
结尾 第 3 招
“三步三要素法”写假期旅行经历类的作文 方法指导
“三步”指按照开头（引出话题）、具体描述、写结束语三个步骤写作。“三要素”指在具体描述时写出旅行的地点，旅行的方式和具体的活动。
写作模版
开头（引出话题）
I had a nice trip...
旅行地点 I went to ... last summer /winter holiday/ on May Day...
具体描述
旅行方式 I went there by...
具体的活动 I +过去式的动词短语+其他.
结束语
I had a good time there. 经典词句
必备单词、短语 必备句型 引出话题 had a nice trip I had a nice trip last winter
holiday. 旅行地点 Sanya
Beijing... I went to Sanya with my
parents. 旅行方式 by train/plane... We went there by plane. 具体活动 rode a bike, went camping, went fishing, rode a horse, ate fresh food, went swimming, took pictures, bought gifts, played football... I played football on the
beach 结束语 had a good
time I had a good time there. 范文赏析
I had a nice trip last winter holiday. I went to Sanya with my parents. We went there by
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旅行地点
旅行方式 plane. I played football with my father. I went swimming in the sea with my mother.
具体的活动 I also ate some fresh food. They were delicious. I took many pictures and bought some gifts
具体活动 for my grandparents. I really had a good time there.
结尾
第 4 招
“三步”指按照开头（引出话题）、具体描述、写结束语三个步骤写作。“两要素”指在具体描述时写出过去的情况和现在的情况。
写作模版
开头（引出话题）
...changed a lot.
过去的情况 ...was...five years ago/then/before. 具体描述
现在的情况
I am...now./ She/He is...now.
结束语
I like my changes very much. 经典词句
必备单词、短语 必备句型 引出话题 change I changed a lot. 介绍过去的情况 was, were, didn’t like..., couldn’t, short, long hair/lomg hair, didn’t wear glasses,
I was quiet five years ago. I didn’t like eggs then. 介绍现在的情况 am, is, are, like(s)..., tall, active, can..., wear glasses,short hair/long hair Now, I am active in class. I am taller than before. 结束语 changes I like my changes very much 范文赏析 Hello, I’m Jane. I changed a lot . Six years ago, I was short and thin. I was
开头
quiet.
I didn’t like eggs. And I couldn’t ride my bike well. But now, I am taller
过去的情况 than before. I am active, too. I have many friends. I like eggs and milk very much. I like riding a
现在的情况
bike. I go cycling every day. I like my changes bery much.
结尾
人物变化 Hello. I am Mike. Before I was short . Now I am tall. Before I was quiet. Now I am active. Before I couldn’t ride my bike. Now I go cycling every day. Before I liked red. Now I like blue. Before I didn’t like eggs. Now I like eggs. I am going to be a teacher one day. I will work in a school. This is my father. Before he was thin. Now he is strong.Before he was quiet. Now he is active. Before he couldn’t cook. Now he can cook. Before he liked milk. Now he doesn’t like milk.